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上个月底,为庆祝墨尔本被联合国教科文组织命名为“世界文学之城”,维州政府和《太阳先驱报 Herald Sun》在维州3~10年级学生中举办一次题为“我的墨尔本 My Melbourne”的作文比赛,形式不拘,可以是诗歌,散文等,字数在300字以内。
女儿跃跃欲试,并写出了一首短诗,其中一些词语就来自她平常阅读积累起来的Writer's Notebook。也许是她这个年龄可能进入喜欢堆砌华丽词藻的阶段了吧,我一向主张文字应尽量平实质朴,但对于一名小学五年级学生的习作来说,在我读到这首短诗之后的第一反应是立即打开电脑谷歌一下,看看会不会是从哪里抄袭或模仿来的,呵呵。。。但经查证,的的确确是出自她的手笔,在这里和大家分享一下。
从整篇的立意和行文中,我突然想到中国古时一句诗词:“小荷才露尖尖角”;愿新足迹上我们这些为人父母者的下一代在澳洲这片热土上都能健康茁壮地成长。。。
FINGERS CROSSED!
:si26
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My Melbourne
Streets teeming with clusters of individuals
The usual scurrying of feet is flooded
With the perpetual roaring of countless vehicles
This is life in a city like no other
Primeval, isolated landscapes modified and bartered
For skyscraper cities towering above humble pathways
Forget typewriters, textbooks and blackboards, it’s all technology
Everyday appears to be a miraculous new discovery
Dawn reveals the sun’s outstretched beams
Which tear through the sombre blanket of nightfall
Conversation gradually oozes in like blood from a wound
Work colleagues feverishly exchange the latest gossip
At late twilight a canvas of stars spreads over the city
That’s when the symptoms of poverty kick in, but not many
The homeless fishing chicken bones out of garbage bins
Their desperate conditions lurking in the alleyways
Apart from that there lingers a far more lively culture
Lights flashing onto less occupied avenues
Night clubs packed to the rafters maintaining its reputation
Of being the renowned location for excitement
The convenience of transport in this city will amaze you
Tram bells tinkling, buses inching block by block
Fatigued, sluggish trains rattle tardily along
Envying contemporary ones gliding arrogantly onward
I feel safe, fulfilled, exceedingly more than satisfied
I don’t ever want to leave this thoughtful capital
I like how everything’s not perfect, but then again, neither am I
This is
My Melbourne
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